Sunday, October 17, 2010

..so you think you are a poet..

i'm lonely..
how stupid could I be
thinking you were for me
I was wrong.
thinking we would last
now it's all in the past 
but it still hurts.
I thought we would have worked
too bad you banged that clerk
and I saw it.
now I order take out for one
instead of two 
feeling all alone.
like a dog with no bone.
i'm lonely..







9 comments:

  1. Graphic. But I mean, I'm not complaining.

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  2. Graphic. But I mean, I'm not complaining.

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  3. This is actually a good poem...i like it, nice job

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  4. you failed. cuz this is good. you suck at bad poetry. sorry :)

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  5. Ya dude this poem is f***in' amazin', i don't know how you are tryin' to pull this off as bad.

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  6. this was the best poem i have read u failed the bad poetry assignment but write a good poem

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  7. That was funny! Good poem! Keep up the good work!

    -Dustin

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  8. The clerk line reminds me of the poem Focker's father-in-law recites about his mother who died of cancer. Very graphic.

    There was too much good stuff in this poem. Though. Your crap poem was too good. Good job.

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