i'm lonely..
how stupid could I be
thinking you were for me
I was wrong.
thinking we would last
now it's all in the past
but it still hurts.
I thought we would have worked
too bad you banged that clerk
and I saw it.
now I order take out for one
instead of two
feeling all alone.
like a dog with no bone.
i'm lonely..
Graphic. But I mean, I'm not complaining.
ReplyDeleteGraphic. But I mean, I'm not complaining.
ReplyDeleteThis is actually a good poem...i like it, nice job
ReplyDeleteyou failed. cuz this is good. you suck at bad poetry. sorry :)
ReplyDeleteThat was very sad good job
ReplyDeleteYa dude this poem is f***in' amazin', i don't know how you are tryin' to pull this off as bad.
ReplyDeletethis was the best poem i have read u failed the bad poetry assignment but write a good poem
ReplyDeleteThat was funny! Good poem! Keep up the good work!
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The clerk line reminds me of the poem Focker's father-in-law recites about his mother who died of cancer. Very graphic.
ReplyDeleteThere was too much good stuff in this poem. Though. Your crap poem was too good. Good job.