Person 1: Mac MacGuff
Person 2: Juno MacGuff
Person 3: Brenda MacGuff
1: I'll get the car!
2:Hurry!!
3: Crap! Where's Liberty Bell??
2: HURRY!!
3: Do we have everything we need?
2:HURRRRRYYYYYYY!!!
2: I hope it's not too bloody..
1: Maybe you should have thought about that before hand!
3: Liberty Bell can't watch.. it'll give her nightmares!
2: HURRRRRRYYY!!! 1: Maybe we just shouldn't go to the movie after all..
ACTION:the MacGuff family is rushing to get the movie on time.
ReplyDeleteCONFLICT: The family is in such a rush.
EVENT: The MacGuff family decides not to go to the movie after all.
okay.. so the changes. well we definitely need some changes. the initial idea of this post was to put this picture up in hopes that readers would think "hey.. they're rushing to the hospital cause Juno is about to have her baby!" and then NOT..at the end of the piece you realize they were just rushing to a movie. okay. okay. the idea was there but i think i failed here. so the changes= start over.